I've made some slight character refinements making them look more simpler and full of shapes. I've played around with the bird's design a little with the wings and with the deer, I've changed its horn and the hue. I'm not sure whether to keep the yellow on the deer or have it as green like my animatic.
I wonder if the butterfly's actual body needs a bit of additional texture too - it looks a bit 'dead' visually in comparison with the other animals. I think the fish could do with some tidying up too in terms of its silhouette - it looks a bit 'complicated' at the moment - not iconic enough yet. Incidently, I do really like the 'otter' creature too as a presence in your world (I know he's not in the animatic...) In terms of colours for all of them, I think they probably need to be representative of specific colours - so a red one, a yellow one, a green one, a blue one, and orange one etc - more sort of obviously, just in terms of making them as iconic as possible.
Hi Jojo,
ReplyDeleteI wonder if the butterfly's actual body needs a bit of additional texture too - it looks a bit 'dead' visually in comparison with the other animals. I think the fish could do with some tidying up too in terms of its silhouette - it looks a bit 'complicated' at the moment - not iconic enough yet. Incidently, I do really like the 'otter' creature too as a presence in your world (I know he's not in the animatic...) In terms of colours for all of them, I think they probably need to be representative of specific colours - so a red one, a yellow one, a green one, a blue one, and orange one etc - more sort of obviously, just in terms of making them as iconic as possible.