Narrative and Character: Anecdote Studios: Character designs 2

Before our talk with Alan, I drew up some designs for our character. Based on the previous post, I went to see if there were any other ideas that I can come up with as he needs to look more "clumsy" rather than a happy man.

Later, after our talk with Alan, we were told that both Tom and my designs should merge together, in other words Tom's silhouette will have the looks from the original (top) image as most of my designs looked too "salesman" style. Here are the ones (below) where I've based Tom's silhouette and my character's looks together. 

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