Major Project: The Carnival of The Animals Pre-viz draft 05

I've added some extra sequences in, also replaced the old elk with the latest version to test out the syncing between feet and beats. I've also had a play around creating water deformers in particular for the Sea Cow's scenes which will be refined later. I've also recolored the sturgeon sequence around 00:30:00 mark as well as having it transition from left to right like the other shots, but might consider changing this?

Changed sturgeon sequence horizontally and using another colour from the colours on the animals.

Major Project: The Carnival of The Animals Pre-viz draft 01

Here it is! The first draft of my animatic! :D There were a few complications in creating duplicates of the same character doing the same action in a scene, in particular the Eagle's abstract sequence which nearly resulted in maya crashing. Once I find a solution to this, it shall be resolved!! (^_^)/b I've also made a change in camera movement at the end to a still camera that zooms out rather than a swerving camera. Any feedback on this would be appreciated and loved!! :D

Original edit: based on animatic.

Version 2: Change of camera movement at the end for a less handheld 'trippy' feel. (edit: re-uploaded)

"A Fishy Tale" Animatic

Here's my first practice in making an animatic using the stills from my storyboard. I've a few shots in the animatic just to make things look more clearer. Apologies!! Its nearly 2 mins long but will try and figure out which shots needs to be cut out. I'm not really good with sound/music but feedback and opinions would be greatly appreciated. ^_^

Unit 4: Story telling- draft 2 screenplay

Here's draft version 2 of the screenplay. It was very hard not to "kill off" the small upper class fish by chucking him out of an opened window but it'll probably be too cruel and dark!! O_O

Screenplay 2

Unit 4: Story telling- screenplay draft

Screenplay

Here is a screenplay draft based on the story of the fish and the elevator gag. The abbreviated words are just camera angles which I could possibly use?

@Phil: Essay First Draft

Hi Phil if you have time do you mind if you have a look over this draft for me please? I went to get it checked out with Tracy today and needed to be restructured, so hopefully this drafts better than my last Unit's! :D Unit 2 Esasy